Just Haiku

I have know idea where they have read it, but some of my friends have recently requested that I post my Haiku that I've composed for my Creative Writing class. It is indeed an honor to be at the receiving end of such request, and therefore I am more that glad to post them here.

Missing You

Moon beaming -- a star twinkling
Tuberoses; clasped around its elongated spikes, blooming --
Why tomorrow feels so long?

Hide and Seek

Heavily overcast sky -- drizzle trickling
An orb-weaver spider giggling under leafs --
Content; sun is hiding somewhere

p/s: please leave you constructive comments pertaining to these two Haiku =)

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